Thursday, May 28, 2009

Write the Meat

I've finally gotten into a decent groove with my WIP where I have a good understanding of my characters, the major plot points, and some confidence that this book might be good(ish) when I'm done. However, I'm at that awkward point, somewhere beyond the first hundred pages, where I'm just plodding along through the meat of the book. It's not the freshness of the beginning, or the excitement of the climax, or the relief of writing the end.

Oy. Drudgery. I'd been doing the "write whatever scene pops into your mind" thing for awhile, and that helped me get to this point, but now I've got to buck up and write the meat.


*caroline hickey

Wednesday, May 27, 2009

Congrats to Daphne!

Awesome news!

Alive and Well in Prague, New York was just named a Bank Street College of Education Best Book of the Year! A huge honor and very much deserved.

Hip, hip, hooray to Daphne! (and to the people at Bank Street, who clearly know good books when they read 'em)


~lisa graff~

Freedom

If you're like me, internet can be an extremely difficult distraction. I'm constantly fighting the urge to pop online, check my Facebook or update my Twitter, or research a random factoid that feels like essential knowledge at the time, but is actually a meaningless time suck. 

I've taken drastic action before. I had Dell remove the wireless internet capabilities from my first ever laptop. Later, I'd make writing dates at the beloved Starbucks Dungeon, where internet and cell service couldn't reach the basement. 

And now, thanks to a heads-up from Sara Zarr, I've discovered MAC FREEDOM. A FREE program that will disable your internet and email for a predetermined block of time. Once it's on, it's on. There's no shutting it off. The clock just has to expire. And you have to write. 

I think it's going to save my life. 

-=siobhan=-

Monday, May 25, 2009

Favorite titles?

Do you ever hear/read a title and just love it immediately? I do. It's kind of like cooking for me. I can't cook but I know what tastes good. I'm not great at thinking up titles but I know when I hear a good one. A recent favorite title for me: Because I am Furniture

Isn't such a good one? Have you heard/read any awesome titles lately? I love talking titles.

Happy Memorial Day!
Lisa GW

p.s. If you're going to be in Paramus, NJ on Wednesday, come stop by my reading/signing.

Thursday, May 21, 2009

A little bit of sunshine for your day

I spotted this on Bookshelves of Doom weeks and weeks ago, and I finally had to share it with you when I realized I was going back to it whenever I needed a smile:



Enjoy!

--Kathryne

Wednesday, May 20, 2009

Awesome Blog Alert

I'm always late in discovering things but now that I've found the blog The Worst Review Ever (thanks to Fuse #8 for the link) I've spent the whole morning reading it. I'm totally shocked at how mean some of these are. I'm actually a reviewer for Publishers Weekly and while I've read some things that were kind of poorly constructed, I've never had even an urge to be even half this harsh, not even secretly if I strongly disliked the book. Too much work goes into a book for anything to warrant this kind of nastiness and seriously nothing is so bad it deserves to be called "a candy-coated turd." I mean, really. I know some of these are Amazon and not professional reviews but can you imagine ever having the urge to write something like this anywhere?

But what's awesome about this blog is hearing author's reactions and seeing all the great support in the comments. This blog is such a good idea and I'm totally addicted!

* daphne grab *

Tuesday, May 19, 2009

Have you guys seen this?

Check it out.

The LA Times has a new weekly series of essays devoted to the writing life. I love it already. The new ones will be posted every Friday.

xoxox
Lisa GW

Monday, May 18, 2009

Meet the Parents

Last week a teen book club at Lovettsville Library in VA chose ISABELLE'S BOYFRIEND for their May selection. So they, very nicely, invited me to join them for their discussion of the book.

I was thrilled to attend and quite impressed by the different observations the readers had about the book. I've been to a bunch of school visits and book fairs recently, but I haven't sat in on a book club discussion of my own work. It was pretty fascinating.

One of the most interesting comments a girl made during our meeting was that she was glad I included Taryn's mom in the book and made her a major character. This reader found it annoying that a lot of YA books she'd been reading had NO parents anywhere -- either the kids were orphans (Harry Potter), or had absent, off-stage parents (Twilight). In real life, parents are a big part of teens' lives, and often in children's and young adult books they get left out, simply because authors find they get in the way of their young characters' story lines.

Are there any children's or teen books you've read recently that had really stand-out parent characters? I'd love to know.

*caroline hickey

Toe to Toe with Neesha Meminger

I recently read and loved SHINE, COCONUT MOON by Neesha Meminger. This book is beautifully written, hard-hitting, and very very memorable!

Here's a synopsis:

Seventeen-year-old Samar — a.k.a. Sam — has never known much about her Indian heritage. Her mom has deliberately kept Sam away from her old-fashioned family. It's never bothered Sam, who is busy with school, friends, and a really cute but demanding boyfriend.

But things change after 9/11. A guy in a turban shows up at Sam's house, and he turns out to be her uncle. He wants to reconcile the family and teach Sam about her Sikh heritage. Sam isn't sure what to do, until a girl at school calls her a coconut — brown on the outside, white on the inside. That decides it: Why shouldn't Sam get to know her family? What is her mom so afraid of? Then some boys attack her uncle, shouting, "Go back home, Osama!" and Sam realizes she could be in danger — and also discovers how dangerous ignorance can be. Sam will need all her smarts and savvy to try to bridge two worlds and make them both her own.


School Library Journal says, "Meminger's debut book is a beautiful and sensitive portrait of a young woman's journey from self-absorbed naïveté to selfless, unified awareness."

The Longstockings recently caught up with Neesha who has been busy signing her book in both the U.S. and Canada! Thankfully, she had a few minutes to spare to answer some very important questions... well, kinda!

What’s the worst job you've ever had?

One of my first jobs was telemarketing in the basement of a residential home. The family who owned it ran a carpet cleaning business and hired teens at minimum wage to sit for hours in the family’s dingy, dark basement and call people at random from the phone book. One of the owners was always there, breathing down our necks. Definitely goes down as one of the worst jobs I’ve ever had!

What is your favorite ice cream flavor?

This one is a toss up between Dulce de Leche and Kulfi Faluda (which is Indian ice cream with rose syrup and noodles. I know – noodles?? But yes, SOOOO yummy!).

What is the book that made you fall in love with reading?

Easy. This was two – same year: Are You There God? It’s Me, Margaret and Tuck, Everlasting. After that, I consumed cart loads of books in any given week. Most of them were romance and fantasy reads, but I also loved the realistic fiction of Paula Danziger, Judy Blume and S.E. Hinton. And the great mysteries of Lois Duncan were a huge draw, too.

Tell us where you went for your first date ever.

OMG. Okay, this is Most Embarrassing Moment and First Date Ever. My date and I went to see a movie at a movie theater that was on the first floor of a major hotel. After the movie was over, my date and I walked out to the circular driveway where people dropped their cars off for the valet dudes and picked up passengers, etc.

I waited there patiently for my date to bring the car around and pick me up – it was February and fa-reezing (and I had to pee) – so, not easy. When I saw his car, I was so relieved. I jumped in and immediately put my hands up to the heating vents. “Thank God,” I said, “I have to pee like crazy!”

When I turned to look at him, there was an old man in the driver’s seat. The poor guy was in complete shock. His mouth was open, but he could only stare at me.

I mumbled an apology and scrambled out just as my date pulled up. Ugh. SO. Embarrassing.

What’s your favorite movie?

I have a lot, but I have to say that I really, really loved Whale Rider about a Maori girl who breaks the tradition of male whale riders, against the wishes of her father, and climbs up on the back of a whale to ride it out to sea.

What is your most annoying habit?

Oh, gosh – just one? Hmm… I would have to say: jumping to conclusions. That annoys me and my loved ones tremendously. I seem to, very quickly, assume that I know things that I clearly DO NOT.

What is your favorite way to procrastinate writing?

I know I’m in good company when I say: The Internet! Social networking, especially – things like Facebook, Twitter, Livejournal, stalking old friends…

***


Thanks so much for stopping by, Neesha! Let's totally go for Kulfi Faluda together one day when we're procrastinating. (And when we're not spotting celebrities in coffee shops. Did I mention yet that one day Neesha and I ran into Bono together and got to shake his hand? Oh, I just did? Ha ha, I knew I'd find a way to work that into this interview!!!)

For more information on Neesha, check out her website. And of course you can (and should!) buy her book here or at your local indie!

:-)

~Coe~

Friday, May 15, 2009

Buy Some Books for Boys!

I've seen this linked to in a few different places, but think it needs to be as widely advertised as possible.

The folks at Guys Lit Wire are expanding their mission of getting boys to read books by building a library for the 2,700 inmates of the L.A. County Juvenile Justice system. The three juvenile halls of that system currently have no books. None. Guys Lit Wire are working with InsideOut Writers Program, which currently runs workshops in the system. Studies by the Rand Corporation have found the program to be effective in reducing violence on the part of the students.

As Guys Lit Wire says:
IOW is committed to reducing recidivism; it is their primary objective. One of the ways to accomplish that is by getting the boys interested in other things and helping them form goals for after they leave the system. As book lovers, we at GLW believe that books can go a big way towards helping achieve the goal of keeping the boys from returning to prison. In LA County there is no library for the teens held in the juvenile system. The boys can read as many books as they want - but someone has to give them those books. According to IOW they are desperate for books on all kinds of subjects and so, that is what we at GLW are going to try and give them.

Go on, read the full post. It will give you more information on InsideOut Writers and the book fair, including how to find the Powells.com wish list of the 125 titles with which the library will be started. The book fair is running for two weeks, but wouldn't it be great if the wish list sold out early?

--Kathryne

Wednesday, May 13, 2009

Toe to Toe with Michael Northrop


I had not one but two starred reviews to choose from when looking for a summary of Michael Northrop’s awesome debut novel GENTLEMEN. Here are some snippets from Booklist that sum it up nicely:

Mike (the narrator), Tommy, Mixer, and Bones form the core of the remedial set at their small-town high school. When Tommy goes missing and their reviled English teacher, Mr. Haberman (who’s trying to get them to read Crime and Punishment), starts acting awfully strange, the three remaining friends jump to some alarming conclusions…. Laced throughout is a steely and intricate look at the permutations of adolescent friendship and the various roles that teens adopt or are assigned in both their social and academic worlds. A riveting thriller? Yep. A nuanced examination of morality? Yep again. What’s amazing is that they never get in each other’s way.

Sounds good, right? Believe me, it is— I had trouble putting this one down and I thought about it long after I’d finished reading.

Michael is one of the funnest people you could hope to get in a conversation with at a NYC teen author event (his reading of a passage of the book in a Russian accent was one for the ages) but for those of you from out of town, not to worry because Michael went Toe to Toe with the Longstockings and here are his extremely entertaining answers:

What’s the worst job you've ever had?

Now, I’ve had some crap jobs—boy, howdy—but one stands out. I worked in the kitchen at a summer camp when I was like 15. Man, that sucked. There was an industrial strength dishwasher that, honest to God, was trying to eat my hands. There was also a “garbage room” in the basement that I just, I mean, I don’t even think I can talk about it.
What is the book that made you fall in love with reading or illustrating?
It was probably Watership Down. I think the fact that there was an animated movie helped. It was like, ‘Listen, dumbass, there’s a colorful, exciting story in this thick brick of paper, and you can access it by reading.’

What’s your most unusual fear?

I guess being buried alive isn’t unusual. Or, I mean, being buried alive IS unusual, but being afraid of it isn’t. I’ll say the fear of blurting out something obscene in a quiet, public setting. I think maybe it’s sort of pre-Tourettes.

What is the first thing you would buy if your next advance was a million dollars?

I would buy, like, four thousand copies of Gentlemen on various websites, and then be like, “Hey, look, Gentlemen is number 1 on all these sites!”

Tell us about the very first story that you remember writing/illustrating when you were younger.

It was a little handmade picture book about a caveman discovering fire. I think he stole it from the sun. My grasp of distance wasn’t very strong at that age. He definitely had a caveman name, too, like Og or Grog or Ugga or something like that.

What's something very few people know about you?
You’d think this would be something embarrassing, but I’ve done a crap job of suppressing that info. That I am dyslexic, had a speech impediment, was once 6’1” and 125 pounds; it’s all a matter of public record.

Same goes for the good stuff. Did I ever tell you that I am distantly related to Jonathan Swift? Oh, I did? Eighteen times? The stuff people don’t know is probably just not that interesting. Well, that and the body I disposed of back in ’04 . . .

What is the first car you ever drove?

I think it was my aunt’s Dodge Omni. Color: rust. True story, though: I own a red 1993 Geo Metro, the same as the little car in Superbad. So my car is basically a punch line.

Who is your literary crush?

I think I’m supposed to say “Jane Eyre” here or something like that, but I am going to say Rachel Weisz’s character in The Mummy. She’s very bookish, drinks scotch, and, let’s be honest, is there anything hotter than a research librarian?

***

Nothing! Well, except maybe a few kidlit writers...

You can keep up with Michael on his blog and buy his fantastic book here or at your local indie.

* daphne grab *

Tuesday, May 12, 2009

Check in


So May has been maybe the busiest month of my entire life. And it's only halfway over! There's been a whole lotta new stuff going down in my world, and I'm just gonna get you up to speed. K? Okay.

1. New website! New look! Look!
2. New book came out! Looky look!
3. Signings and readings galore. Come to one! In fact, I got one tomorrow. Teen Author Reading, Jefferson Market Library, 6pm.
4. Sequel due on... Friday. Panic ensues.

Which brings me to my point. How am I gonna finish my book by FRIDAY??? I'm really stressed yall! I had a good talking to with Siobhan today, and she had some good ideas for the book, which was encouraging. But now I still have to go and actually write. I think after this is all over I will have learned something about myself: which is, Do I work well under pressure? I hope the answer is YES. What about you guys? Do you work better with a ticking clock?

5. Oh yeah, and I still don't even have a title! Title panic ensues. Titles are HARD!

anxiously yours,
Jenny

Monday, May 11, 2009

fun events

MLIP&G has been out for two months now and I've really been enjoying promoting it. This past Friday I traveled to Woodbridge, NJ for a librarians conference and it was great. I'm usually so bad at speaking off the cuff but I have to say that book promotion has helped me get better at this. I read/spoke/answered questions for about forty minutes and I felt that it went well. I also had the privilege of listening to other authors/illustrators like Peter Brown, Marc Tyler Nobleman, Laura Ruby, and Benedict Carey.

Tomorrow I'll be at Barnes & Noble in Manhasset reading and signing. So if you're on Long Island, come on by!

Aside from book promotion I also feel like I'm in a good reading zone. Do you guys ever feel like that? Like sometimes you'll be on a break from reading and then you'll read a slew of good books and feel like you've fallen in love all over again? I just finished two Longstocking books - Same Difference and The Summer I Turned Pretty. Ah-mazing. Both of them. Loved them to bits. Felt sad when they ended. Now I'm reading If I Stay by Gayle Forman and it's heartbreaking and wonderful so far.

xoxoxo
Lisa GW

Friday, May 08, 2009

An enlightning interview with Michael Cadnum

Recently Daphne and I read The Peril on the Sea, which is coming out later this month. A high-seas historical adventure set during the English battle with the Spanish Armada in 1588, this book has romance, pirates, and quite a few chuckles. So we were pleased as peaches when author Michael Cadnum (a National Book Award finalist, woot!) agreed to stop by for an interview.

***

Lisa: I have long been afraid of writing historical fiction, because it seems like so much work and there are so many details to get wrong! But you pull it off with a seamless flair. Do you have any tips for authors wanting to dip their toes in historical waters? And how on earth do you do your research?

Michael: The essential principle in writing a novel is: live in the world of your characters. When my characters take a drink, I taste that sleeping potion, or that bitter medicine, or that honeyed wine--I almost absolutely experience the flavor as I write. When Sherwin nearly drowns at the beginning of the novel, I know how he feels, struggling to survive. And I feel the chill in his body, and his wonderment at being alive. This is why I stress that I don’t write for an audience. I write through my characters and their experiences. It is like being alive many times over—an intensely rewarding and deeply challenging experience.

As for research: I have been interested in the high seas, and knights and sword fighting since I was a child. When I embark on a book like The King's Arrow or Peril on the Sea it is more a question of what to leave out rather than what to put in.

Lisa: What parallels do you see between the long-ago setting of Peril on the Sea and the world we currently inhabit, particularly in regard to the wars we’re each fighting? Did you specifically set out to create these allusions, or did that all arrive more organically?

Michael: I’m concerned that some people today feel empowered to kill human beings in the name of religion. This was a problem during the Crusades, it was a problem during the Elizabethan era, and the problem continues. This was not a motivating force behind my writing—my love for my characters and my zest for adventure were foremost. Even so, this issue was often on my mind.

Daphne: You also write contemporary fiction. How are the processes different for each type of project, and what are the unique challenges of each?

Michael: Try thinking of historical fiction as stories about a future that you can visit. You can look at tailors' books of clothing, and practice fencing and read love letters from the absent era. As though the future endowed us with artifacts! Similarly, think of a contemporary novel as being about the very near future—the events have not yet happened, but can. In this way, all writing is about an imaginative future—one with secrets that you can discover.

Daphne: Sometimes male authors write clunky female characters but Katharine was spot on. How do you get yourself into the mindset of a girl, especially one living back in time?

Michael: I love to pour my awareness into the vessels of various shapes—young. old, historical, contemporary, male and female. People are shockingly different from each other, and sometimes my compassion falters, but that is all in the adventure of writing. For me, one of the most challenging characters in Peril on the Sea was the salty, crusty mariner Tryce. His manner and voice struck me as so crotchety and foreign that I could not perceive him. And then one day he began to amble and talk, almost exactly as though a drawing took on animation, and walked right off the page. By the time Tryce suffers his violent misfortune, I felt that I knew him well, and I hoped—and continue to hope—that he fully recovers from his injuries.

Lisa: So do you think of writing characters who are very dissimilar to you in the same way you think about writing about places you’ve never been to—that it’s all a matter of a writer’s imagination? Do you think there are any stories a particular writer could never write, based on his experience, or lack thereof?

Michael: We live in an era when people are all working hard to sound like everybody else, and use the same speech patterns and the same vocabulary in text messages, email and conversation. But the fact is that people are very dissimilar from each other--we try to be alike, and we almost succeed. But our inner self, our real, true voice, is very often unique. This means that a writer has to have faith in his talent and his compassion, and go ahead and take up any subject that seems alive.

Daphne: My favorite character was probably Captain Fletcher, the pirate with the deep-set morals. Where did he come from? Is he based on a real historical figure?

Michael: That is a question best put to the good captain himself. Why did he allow me to write about him? In fact, many of the Elizabethan pirates were contradictory scoundrels. Drake would not allow swearing on his ship, and he had a reputation for being even-handed with his prisoners, but he was little more than a terrorist where the Spanish were concerned. Drake’s attack on Cadiz—which I depict in Ship of Fire—and his piracy during the battle against the Armada won the disapproval of many of his countrymen.

This is not say that Drake or Fletcher were hypocrites—they were beyond such a simple designation. They were killers, with heartfelt scruples about their own morality. Don’t we know people who believe in God and yet champion war? Fletcher is a fictional creation, and Drake was a real person, but they are both complex, sometimes ruinously contradictory people, like many of us.

Lisa: You wrote this book before the recent headlines made pirates more of a reality in our everyday lives. Did these events make you look at your characters in a new light at all?

Michael: The people that remind me most of the pirates in Peril on the Sea are the hired security forces in Iraq, and the politicians who tacitly or explicitly allowed them to have so much power. Another piratical group would have to be some of our recent financial masterminds. The way harm has been done to civilians in the name of security, and the way damage has been done to our economy in the name or profit, is in a way little different from the zealous and energetic misbehavior of the Elizabethan sea captains. Remember that the key element of Elizabethan piracy was that the government not only forgave the crimes--the crown profited. Many people made money off the privateers.

Similarly, a lot of us have thrived, until recently, in an economy puffed up and made counterfeit by greedy schemers. When I look at myself, at my fellow humans, and at my government, I wonder if we aren’t all, in some way, just a little bit those men and women who used to make money off the proceeds of pirates.

Daphne: Which character do you most identify with and why?

Michael: All of my characters must come right out of me, being made of my breath and my blood. So I don’t pick favorites, at least not in public. But the strange and most dynamic aspect about characters is that they seem more alive than I do, and more insistent in being heard than I would ever be. And they do escape my control—I have to let them. Captain Fletcher and Katharine began to develop a dangerous and guarded relationship right under my eyes, and there was nothing I could do to caution Katharine or to warn off the formidable captain. The captain realizes that one of the threats he must defend Katharine against is own passion.

Lisa: This is a historical novel but it's also an adventure story, a coming of age tale and a romance. What kind of book did you originally set out to write (maybe one or all of these) and how did it change as the process went on?

Michael: Writing for me as an adventure—an extended act of discovery. Because this particular novel follows a genuine, violent ten day period of bloodshed and stormy weather, I was freed to depict actual events—I didn‘t have to make up this sweeping calamity. It really happened. But as to the creation of the novel, and the hopes and fears of my characters—I had faith in them, and I knew that they would tell their stories through me if I let them.

Daphne: You have written a lot of books that have been very well received. What advice do you have for newbie writers like myself?

Michael: Seek a mentor as dangerous and as demanding as Captain Fletcher. To encourage Sherwin to write the story of the captain’s life, he advises, “You keep on with me, and mark me as I speak. I’ll inspire your powers.” Let fascinating characters find a place in your life, and listen to what they have to say.

Lisa: If you could have any profession other that writer, what would it be?

Michael: Maybe you could let me try to be a hawk, or a cat, or a horse. In some safe way, so I wouldn’t fall out of the sky or run into anything. I wish I could see through the eyes of the animals I have known.
***
Thanks so much for stopping by, Michael! And thanks for the great advice!
~lisa graff~

Trying to get what you need

When I sprained my ankle last Wednesday, my first thought was "oh, well, being confined to the couch should make for a great writing week."

I then spent the next seven days reading, surfing the internet, and watching TV. I think I added one paragraph to my WIP, and I'm going to have to redo it.

I must be growing up at last, because for the first time since I can remember I didn't beat myself up about a spell of writer's block. I had a frustrating morning, then I sighed, shrugged, and watched three straight hours of Doctor Who. Yeah, it sucked to lose a few days--I'm trying to finish this draft before my parents get here, in two weeks--but I don't have such a full schedule over the next two weeks that I can't make it up.

The writer's blogosphere is such a great place to hang out, full of people wrestling with similar issues and supporting each other through the challenges of this life. But somehow, the lessons that have gotten burned into my brain--all from the pre-blogosphere days, funnily enough--are pretty much all destructive: if you don't have a set writing schedule, you aren't really a writer, and only posers write in coffeeshops, and if you were a real writer, you wouldn't need anything to get your story down except pencil and paper.

Well, for once, screw that. If I need a certain amount of stimulation to write well, then I need to put myself in a place that offers that level of stimulation, even if it is a cliche. If, on the days I'm writing at home, a cup of tea helps signal to my brain that I'm getting to work now, then I should make myself a cup of tea before I get started. And darn it, I am not any less of a writer because I take some sick days when I sprain my ankle.

I am finally--it was a long seven days--cleared to walk again, so I'm off to test-drive a coffeeshop a friend told me about, where they light a fire on cold drizzly days like this one. I'm hoping they have good music playing, and no free wi-fi, and that there are other people there having conversations, because all of those things help me focus.

What are your writing needs? Are you one of those lucky people who can produce under any circumstances, or do you need a room of your own and £500 a year? Do you write to music, or in silence? We all know that if push came to shove we'd find a way to get the writing done regardless, but what's the part of your writing ritual you'd be sorriest to lose in case of apocalypse?

--Kathryne

Wednesday, May 06, 2009

For your viewing pleasure

A funny music video about the pains of editing a novel, from writer Lara Zielin, who 
seems like a very funny lady indeed. If this video is any indication, her debut novel 
is sure to be a hoot!



(My fave part is when the editorial letter chases her down the sidewalk. Duuuude. 
Been there!)

~lisa graff~

The Highs of Writing

There's a great interview with Coe over at School Library Journal.

In it Coe states how one of her favorite surreal moments as an author was the day she sat and signed books next to Ann M. Martin. She doesn't even mention winning the LA Times Book Prize, which most people would expect to be the answer. That's because the book lover in her is still more jazzed to meet an author/hero, than to be one.

I think it's neat how the things we expect to be big moments for us as writers are often not the ones that resonate the most. I remember thinking that selling my first book would be huge, but getting an agent was actually more exciting for me, because that was the moment I felt I was On My Way. And seeing my books on the shelves is nice, but not as great as having a kid ask me when I'm going to write a sequel.

One of the happiest moments I've had as a writer was at the ALA conference in 2007, where I was able to sit in on a session with Judy Blume. When she got up to the podium I got teary-eyed, just thinking of the effect her books had on me as a kid, and the many, many times I've read them. I think that in my mind and ego, I will always be a Reader first, and a Writer second.

*caroline hickey

Grrrrr


I have been waiting a while to write this one particular scene in my WIP, a really fun one that I’ve been building up to. Today was the day and so far it’s driving me insane. For some reason I just can’t hit it. The setting is flat, the dialogue is stilted and the characters are feeling foreign to me. Each time I tweak I seem to make it more predictable and cliché, not less. I know I need to just step back, breath and try again later but I can’t. It’s like picking the edge of a loose scab when you know you shouldn’t but can’t stop your fingers from working it over. I can’t stop reading through, tinkering, rereading, getting irritated at how it now sucks even more, and so on. Ugh, this is so not a good writing day!

* daphne grab *

Tuesday, May 05, 2009

Toe to Toe with Sheba Karim


Today we are lucky enough to be visited by Sheba Karim, whose debut YA novel, Skunk Girl, absolutely blew me away. About teenager Nina Khan, a Pakistani-Muslim girl growing up in the tiny town of Deer Hook, NY, it's a book about teen love, over-achieving older sisters, and coping with what Kirkus Reviews delightfully referred to as "an overabundance of body hair." Basically, it rocks. Go read it.


And in the meantime, let's ask Sheba some silly questions!

Longstockings: What was your most embarrassing moment?

Sheba: Skunk Girl is fiction but there is one thing in there that actually happened to me—the scene where Nina goes to the dance and one of the popular boys asks her to dance and she’s really excited and then the boy shows her that his fingers are crossed and yells, “Pysche!” Well, maybe that’s more humiliating than embarrassing. But though I was mortified back then, I’m now glad it happened because I got to use it in my novel!

Longstockings: What’s your favorite movie?

Sheba: My favorite movie growing up was a move called Lady Jane, about a woman who becomes the queen of England for a mere nine days. It was Helena Bonham Carter’s first big role, and I must have seen it a dozen times. It had a lot going for it—Tudor hotties, royal conspiracies, budding romance, tear-inducing tragedy.


Longstockings: What is your favorite flavor of ice cream?






Sheba: I’m a chocolate fiend. I can eat chocolate ice cream with chocolate syrup with chocolate whip cream. I love chocolate in all forms (except white chocolate, which isn’t really chocolate, but a tasteless confection masquerading as chocolate), but my favorite ice cream flavor has to be chocolate peanut butter. So bad for you, and oh so good.



Longstockings: What's your favorite place on earth?

Sheba: I love to travel and I’m lucky in that I’ve seen a lot of beautiful, amazing places. It’s hard to pick just one place, but I would have to say New York. I love the diversity of it. I love sitting in the subway and looking at the other people sharing the car with me, people of different religions and ethnicities and ages and colors and temperaments. New York is truly a city where there is something for everyone, and this is why so many different, wonderful people call it home.


Longstockings: What’s the worst job you've ever had?

Sheba: The worst job I ever had was as a hostess for TGI Fridays on Newbury Street in Boston. It was a really busy location. We were called “SPGs” which stands for “smiling people greeters,” and though I always made sure to smile, on the inside I was an exhausted people greeter who had half a mind to smack the next customer on the head with the drinks menu. The most stressful part of the job was estimating how long a party would have to wait for a table. Tell them too long a time period and they’d go shopping down the street and wouldn’t be present when their table came up. Tell them too short a time and they’d soon be standing in front of you, demanding to know why their table wasn’t ready yet. Also, the restaurant only had about three different cd’s that they played over and over again, and it became the soundtrack of my college angst. Even now, when I hear certain songs from it, I cringe.

Longstockings:
Tell us about the very first story that you remember writing when you were younger.


Sheba: It was about a young woman whose father was the ruler of this fictitious land named Prussia. One day, a cruel army from a foreign land arrives and takes over. The woman’s family flees, but the woman is captured by soldiers and thrown into prison. She is interrogated by a general who wants to know where her father has fled and where the family wealth has been hidden. The general is cold and ruthless and devastatingly handsome, though (surprise!) under that cold, ruthless, and devastatingly handsome exterior lays a lonely, sensitive interior. Over the course of the interrogations, the general and the woman fall in love. I actually envisioned this as a novel but I never got past the first interrogation. I also didn’t realize that Prussia was once a real place—when I found out I thought, “I can’t believe they stole my name!”


Longstockings: What’s your most unusual fear?

Sheba: I have a paranoia that one day one of those sharp ends sticking out from the tops of umbrellas is going to poke me in the eye.

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Thanks for visiting us, Sheba! (I am totally putting Lady Jane in my Netflix queue right now, by the way. Tudor hotties!!)

~lisa graff~

Monday, May 04, 2009

WWMD (What Would Matilda Do?)

Over the weekend, Jezebel posted a super awesome glossary of slang terms inspired by children's books. My favorite example came from Harriet the Spy.
Golly-Up: If you write something down about someone you know, and they find out about it, be prepared to "do two things, and you don't like either one of them. 1: You have to apologize. 2: You have to lie. Otherwise you are going to lose a friend."
Ex: "I didn't make that blog post private, so now I'm going to have to Golly-Up and apologize to her."
Hee!

And of course, I had to come up with one of my own for The Hunger Games.
FoxFace: Someone who does something devious behind your back. Ex: "As soon as I left the room to get her a glass of water, that foxface totally snuck a peek at my royalty statement!"
Okay. Now you try!

-=siobhan=-

Saturday, May 02, 2009

If you live in or near Queens

Come to Borders in Glendale at 2pm today. I'll be reading/signing/answering questions.

Fun times!
Lisa GW

Friday, May 01, 2009

Go shopping for books!

Today is Buy Indie Day.

Happy May, Happy Friday and Happy Buy Indie Day!

xoxoxo
Lisa GW

Changing Perspective


My newest challenge with my WIP is switching voices. I am writing three characters, switching narrators at each new chapter, which is a blast but in a single writing session it’s really hard to go back and forth. For a while I was pushing myself to finish a chapter every time I sat down to write, but that didn’t work at all. Some days it’s easy to write a whole chapter but other days I’m lucky to get half way through. So then the next day I'd open up the document and have half a chapter that I’d finish with writing time to spare and a whole new character’s skin to crawl into. For a couple of days I tried going to the same character’s next chapter but that didn’t work. Unlike several of my fellow Longstockings I need to write chronologically and it made me feel all disoriented to jump ahead.

So what I’ve finally settled on is trying finding ways to jump out of the one character and into the next . Stopping writing for fifteen minutes and listening to music that makes me think of the new character helps. It also helps to do something physical, like take a quick walk or run the vacuum across the house. Stuff that gets me out of my head. And sometimes it really works; other times not so much. Anyone else have this dilemma? Or some answers to help solve it?

* daphne grab *

Creative Writing Lesson Plan Post V: Grading

(For more on this topic: IV, III, II, and I.)

Lesson Five: What do you mean I have to grade these assignments?

We all know how hard writing is. We also know how personal it is, how comments about your writing can feel like comments about you as a person. We know that some people just plain have more talent for it than others. We know that a reader's response to a piece of writing can be incredibly subjective. All of these things make grading a kid's creative writing seem like an exercise in pointless cruelty--for both the teacher and the student.

It's not, really. Granted, you don't want to go around assigning A's and B's if you don't have to, but if you're a classroom teacher, the time will come when you have to. The same techniques that you used in the peer critique will help you grade creative writing in a way that is fair, objective, and helps your students see what they've done well and where they can improve.

1. Make sure the kids know exactly what is expected of them.
Rubrics are your friend! A rubric goes much further than a set of instructions for the assignment, because it gives kids a chance to see not only what they have to do, but what criteria you're going to use to judge how well they did it.

I used RubiStar to give my rubrics a base last year: I never used their result word-for-word, but it was a good illustration of what kinds of requirements I should be setting for an A, for a B, etc. Developing Writers at learner.org also has a good one.

2. Give kids a chance to turn in rough drafts and get feedback.
This is where the peer critique exercise from last week (link to IV, above) comes in really handy. Not only does it save you grading everything twice (though you will have to review the critiques), but it gives the kids experience in evaluating creative work. That helps get them away from the idea that teachers just assign grades based on what we "like."

3. Institute a "no grade is final" policy.
This one is a LOT more work for you, granted. But it helps the kids get a better grasp on the skills we're teaching, and that's what we're in this for, right? I had this policy for every assignment or test across the board: if you earned below a 92 and you think you can do better, you can revise the assignment and turn it in for half-credit (so if the original assignment got a 75 and the revision would have gotten a 95, the final grade would be 85).

That's it! That's the basics of teaching creative writing in five easy pieces. I had a lot of fun writing this series, and I heard from a lot of you that you'll be using it, which makes it even more fun.

If anyone has further questions, please e-mail me: londonlongstocking {AT} yahoo {DOT} co {DOT} uk, and I'll post answers here.

Happy Teaching!
Kathryne